on Foot

on Foot

I was under her influence

got pulled over

and under

and inside out

lost my license to love

now I am on probation,

and must look away

every time there is flirting

from the passing lane.

My heart could not pay another fine.

erin-cilberto

3/6/22

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

You would think your words would cover any fines accrued. And to pull you over and shake you down is just rude. Especially since you're such a poetic dude!

(If you need a bucket to barf in after reading that I'll write one up for you!)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, please!!!!!!
thanks, Bill,
j.

[M. J. Smith]

Personally, I'd rather just pay a speeding ticket and leave! Cool words. Lots of fun. As my generation says:
Excellent!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

or as Keanu Reeves would say....in Bill and Ted's.....
thanks M.J.
j.

[Fran Marie]

A cleverly crafted
and witty piece of
writing ..a fun read
a bummer when you
can't flirt..nice one

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Fran,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Summed up so perfectly its funny

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew,
j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hah, 'tis better to love once than never, or so they say :p
Loved reading you again :))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, YumnaKay....
so nice to see you back.
j.

[Writergurl]

This is a fun read, enjoyed this

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, writergurl,
j.

[JE Falcon]

This was a fun read, but I have to say, "That's what you get for using the Passing-Lane too often."

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, JE.
j.

[Dave Brown]

Does this leave the lover's learner license in limbo?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I believe so, thank you Dave.
j.

[Patricia]

Fly by flirting lol, love this

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Patricia,
j.