slight of strings

slight of strings

 

 

 

etcetera bones

rusted hinges

the mind wakes to rain

 

I run amok

in quicksand blues

I love you

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/16/22

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

quicksand blues....love that. Sometimes it can feel like love imprisons a person like quicksand does. Rusted hinges? Well, I think at our age we all have them! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

mine probably squeak more than most.
thank you, Lydi.
j.

[Tania Mo]

Bones as rusted hinges are clever.Brief and powerful end.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind comment, Tania.
j.

[Patricia]

And there ya go! Expressed in a few words the body and the heart, with three words we try to express in different words but sometimes just writing I love you is more poetic.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review, Patricia,
j.

[Lisasview]

Oh gosh, did this short work pull at my heart strings.. So much meaning there..dear Jacob..Running amok.. great image...and, ending in time to say simply..
I love you.
Lisa

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Lisa,
j.

[Cherrie]

I love the unique angle of this.
The thinking cap is in place but in the end, all that needs to be said is 'I love you ".

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yeah, it's kind of like that!

Thank you, Cherrie...
appreciate YOU.
j.

[knighngale]

the base is nice, I love this one, it's hard to read because it's perfect in every way, each line so delicious, :D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, knighngale,
j.

[knighngale]

your welcome, Cilberto, :D

[M. J. Smith]

Ain't it crazy what love does to us? And man, do I hate the haunting that follows break ups! Jeesh! Nicely done, Sir.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, M.J.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

So immensely powerful is this brevity. I woke to the sound off strings two days ago. Pierced my soul it did and the dam burst. Stunning poetry J.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...
heading to school, but will reply to your message when I get back, and thank you for letting me know what's up.
j.