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erin-cilberto

4/7/22

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

As I read reminds me of a busy train station or airport
Nicely done enjoyed this

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie,
j.

[John the Baptist]

Perhaps you need to post a sign reading "By invitation only."

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that is an idea...thank you, John,
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

Reminds me of the scene at Heathrow airport at the end of Love Actually where the arrivals are greeted to the tune "God Only Knows".
A brilliant song ... and a brilliant use of it.

Life is a series of arrivals and departures and there are always the questions ...

Can I? Should I? Will she? ... how's it going? Feeling better?

Are we there yet?

You've got me thinking now j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I don't think we are there yet....
thank you for your insights, Ted,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Dear Jacob. Always more questions.
"questions
more questions
most questions"
Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for taking a peek at this one...appreciate your attention.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.

[Chris Shaw]

This is a real puzzle to me in a way J. Life is a whole lot of arrivals and departures as we travel through. We love and love is grand, but hate is a strong word. I don't tend to use it. I prefer the word dislike. Hate has its place though when it comes to invaders in certain parts of the world.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it has its place, doesn't it.
thank you for giving this piece some attention...
figured it was a dud...
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Nothing you ever write is a dud. There is always something to say about your lines.