Peroxide Amusement

 

Peroxide Amusement

 

 

 

exploitive blonde

a rampage of feelings extracted

a tarnished color

a sky imperative

in clouding my eyes

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/21/22

Reviews

[duff]

The title is great and in just a few lines there are no boundaries. So many thoughts with this one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, duff, for your kind words.
j.

[William Michael Reeves]

If your imperative is to exploit my mind and tarnish my eyes, you've succeeded! I've had a few conversations about ambiguity lately. Needed some, so here I come.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the ambiguity of relationships....usually cleared up but not only with a good theme.
j.

[redd Brick Keshner]

I am enjoying tis poetic journey. Sensing that one can graduate from blonde jokes and move on to blonde verse. jks. The depth of observation is something well worth looking into. Thanks for sharing. Frederick.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Fredrick,
j.

[Gee]

It seems that natural beauty is now not good enough for most women, instead false lashes, nails, b***s, along with veneers, botox seem to be their idea of beauty. Hmmmm, how wrong they are.
Hope you are well Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Gee,
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

I can see her now. A bleached blonde strutting into a room and every man noticing....some negatively. So much to read into these few lines, Jacob. Lydi***

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi...
some people can really fool us in love.
j.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I've always been partial to redheads myself. The blonde bombshells got nothing on the nitroglycerin. (laughing) I enjoyed this Jacob. Nicely penned. F.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

That makes two of us...redheads...tend to make me get weak kneed.....
j.

[Chris Shaw]

This little piece reminds me of my Dad. He liked women to look natural. Disliked anything fake. He loathed hair dye and nail varnish. He would have completely disapproved of nail bars and fake nails. I love that word tarnished. Such a strong word. He would have approved of it. I travelled far with this piece of brevity J.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris, for sharing that about your dad. i guess I am a bit old fashioned as well.
j.

[V]

Dear Jacob, I felt obliged to return the favor and share some thoughts (& feelings) on your writing:
So much expression in so little words. Your words avail very 'much' in your case. Particularly the last two lines are strong & intriguing. I've always loved your way with words.
This is chemistry, emotion, picturesque in a modern style. Imperial.
Thanks for sharing this expressive read, V.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind review, V.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You must like them natural.
I love it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like everything natural...
thank you, my friend,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! You are welcome sir Jacob .

[Sami Khalil]

"exploitive blonde

a rampage of feelings extracted

a tarnished color

a sky imperative

in clouding my eyes"