the hereafter he is after

the hereafter he is after

by the by

there is you amongst

all of this holocaust

revisited

the stamping out of a people

ignited messages 

of disregard

considered coldness

calculated infamy

for what?

a one-bomb fix in the end

and then a crowd waiting

at the door

as an angry God decides

who will pass on,

who will just pass

by and by

by and by

his grin rising like a Turkish moon

on a clear night.

erin-cilberto

5/19/22

Reviews

[lightsong]

Who creates wars?

Humans, their greed, their negative unconsciousness, their ego, their conscious behavior of they are the best and all else are nothing. when the day when ALL of us will be the same, we will see who will pass and who will not. an emotional write, I can feel the Poet sitting alone under the moon and have the conversation with God above, and he must know that He hears him.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am quite touched by your review, lightsong.
and appreciate that a reader finally commented on these words...I feel bad for my poems if they get little attention...I don't care about the attention, but these are my children...I want them to succeed...and you have given this poem its first step.
thank you kindly, my poetic friend.
j.

[lightsong]

You are very welcome Mr. J❤️ I try my best to give my friends their kindness back. I understand You completely, our poems are our babies and we want them to succeed in this cruel life:>. but I don't think You need to worry about yours, You are one of the most active, great and famous Poets here ✨

[jacob erin-cilberto]

The poems are important, not me...but thanks for the very kind words, lightsong.
j.

[lightsong]

yes, understood. their messages are important to the world :>