resisted residence

resisted residence

expansion,

let's add on 

another wing to our

relationship

fly, more in love

feather our understanding

in airy flight

opposing to supposing

there are still clouds

to emaciate

tears to dry

we can fly

given one more take off

we might take from

what grounded us

molt those old causes

find relevancy in a disheveled

nest,

that is not damaged beyond repair

is not condemned but could find

refurbished sentiment

a fresh coat of passion

stay

i have repapered my walls

if you could break down yours

we could add on

another wing to our

relationship

and keep the house.

erin-cilberto

6/16/22 

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

This is such a great metaphor, absolutely love it!!! I think us older folks could certainly build a new wing and paint it with a new found love; a better understanding, a new look on life; so, if you could think about a brand new coat of insight, that would be the path to a long euphoric life; I already changed my wallpaper, now it's your turn.
Brilliant!
Best,
B.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, a brand new coat of insight...I could go for a long euphoric life.
my turn,
thank you, Betty,
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

True, true! I wish I could have thought of that!
You’re very welcome J.

[Lydia Shutter]

Love the metaphor here....like renovating a house, sometimes a relationship needs to be renovated. Walls are meant to be broken. It is the one who can do this who is the winner in love. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Lydi,
j.