7/22/22 No Title

7/22/22

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tormented interior

the heart confesses

love, the restraint

bonds too close

to amend

the sentence exhumed

a plea entered

the judge of semantics

dead on the bench

parsed employ

confession thrown out

a weak period typed

at the end of a mistrial

or an incomplete thought.

erin-cilberto

7/22/22

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh when the mind cannot be made up the minds court must ask to go over the facts before making a decision.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true, Cowboy,
thank you,
j.

[John the Baptist]

The legal imagery may represent either a romantic failure or a muse that is refusing to deliver. Either one is a justification for another glass of wine.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

If I drank wine, I would have a glass with you.
thanks, John,
j.

[Patricia]

I try to never confess, always gets me into trouble and my passion is always misunderstood because of my lack of understanding. I feel this one! Excellent!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Patricia,
j.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Guilty of being too good. I'm always impressed by the flow of your thoughts and the way you tie dissimilar ribbon into similar bows.
W

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind comments, Winston,
j.

[redzone]

this poem leads us in so many different directions and its strength is that it pulls at you all at once..... I love this pull as it allows for the brain to actually work and think and most important to simply embrace the words spoken/written... how the poem is read/interpreted not only says something about the reader, but more that the poet has created what a work of art should do.... think, feel, see the world from different eyes, among other emotions..... by the way, he/she/they are guilty as charged!!! our "lying" eyes know what we saw.... ;0) nicely penned, Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind review, Curt,
j.

[Andrew John]

I seem to have so many incomplete thoughts, thoughts about . . . er . . . This rather gets me thinking.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think sometimes I am an incomplete thought.
thank you, Andrew,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

the heart confesses love
confession thrown out

Isn't that often the case that something is said, which stirs up a hornet's nest but by then it's too late

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris,
j.

[Relic]

How many times have we said something we shouldn't have but now it's too late. Love is a many splintered thing and often causes much pain.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"Love is a many splintered thing" gotta love that line,
thanks, Relic,
j.