the stalled front

the stalled front

 

 

soon,

i will be yesterday's

forecast

 

cloudy

with scattered sun

but a chance of pain

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/25/22

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think we all feel this way sometimes, like we fear we might hurt someone by being ourselves. But we must rain in order to pour out our souls.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like the way you put that, Dale,
thanks for your words,
j.

[Andrew John]

Oh, yes, we're so used to be yesterday's forecast - often forecast by no one, because no one is interested in us today, or it's a Sunday and we see not a soul. But the pain? Hmm. Needless to say, J, I like the piece. Thank you. Oh, I hope there's no pain for you! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Andrew,
j.

[John the Baptist]

Sounds as though there has been a drought. Cheer up. The weather always changes.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, especially in Trinidad.
thank you, John,
j.

[W. Barrett Munn]

When we write about it, does that make it less real or more real? Surely there is a Farmer’s almanac for long range forecasts.
Winston

[jacob erin-cilberto]

of the heart? I want that almanac...
thank you, Winston,
j.

[Lathen Griffiths]

It’s an awful thing having to accept pain as being the norm, there’s no normality after it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that is quite true...thank you, Lathe,
j.

[Ken e Bujold]

Very clever Jacob. poignant look into the future we all inevitably will face

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ken...
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Wow, this packs quite a punch and it is so clever. What a metaphor and brevity with it too. Excellent J.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris, for your kind words,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Unbelievably clever
Love love love it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie.
j.