it was

it was

 

 

 

 

bleached blonde

reconciliation

an understanding of the turning of the screw

 

a likeness of darkness

and lost momentum

blame tossed randomly

specifically

artificially

 

life a path of indecision

for one

creates decision 

in another

and a time to move on

 

the intelligent scheme

needed to forge a path

of least resistance

 

of self-preservation

an understanding of the turning of the screw

 

her time to move on.

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/13/22

Reviews

[Ken e Bujold]

I must be getting dyslexic. 2nd time I've read a work of yours and lost a letter. This time its an "l" as I read bleached as beached blonde, which still works :)

fun read friend

[jacob erin-cilberto]

some might say she was beached. thank you, Ken,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

You know that turning of the screw is such a pain. Torture I would say. When that happens you take the quickest exit out, run and don't look back :)

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as Boston sang.."Don't look Back"---
thank you, Chris.
j.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Taming of the screwed shrew?
I love how tightly wound this one is, like cutting into a golf ball to find miles of rubber packed.
Winston

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a Titleist?
nice shot.
thank you, Winston,
j.

[W. Barrett Munn]

a Titleist?
it was

[jacob erin-cilberto]

;)))) obviously I liked your golf reference...Most of the guys I caddied for back in the day used Titleists...
I washed enough of them in the ball washers.