delete love

delete love

in-box full,

out-box tired

flooded messages

usurp intrusively

my fingers calloused

heart as well

erin-cilberto

9/17/22

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

A heart has choices but chooses to make the same mistakes until enough is enough and age brings forth a heart that says I can’t be bothered.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, andrew,
j.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

This is a sharp, mysterious write. I love it. It tells a whole story with very few words and I like that. Sometimes you need to tell a story that way. Life can just be so tiring and that’s what I get from this, this is a deeply relatable poem in every sense of the word. Over time the stress changed us. Thank you for sharing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind review, Vertigo.
j.

[JD Major]

An intriguing read and title, Jacob, well and concisely written,
JD

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, JD,
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

I don't believe the in-box is ever so full of love that it can not accept more. Your heart, my friend, could never be calloused! I like your short writes. They get the point across powerfully. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi,
j.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Too much touch tech trouble.

Winston

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice alliteration, Winston

[Ken e Bujold]

know exactly how you feel Jacob. My in box so full and tired I don't even bothered opening it for days

[jacob erin-cilberto]

days and days...sometimes keeping up with life does get tiring,
thank you, Ken,
j.

[Lorry]

If at first you don't succeed, try, try, then control, alt, delete. 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

good advice, Lorry,
thanks,
j.

[duff]

Try again and try again. Its a marathon. Nice work Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, duff...
I might just like short races,
j,

[LadyNaida]

Pretty much that's how it feels sometimes. Thanks for sharing this write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, LadyNaida,
j.

[LadyNaida]

You're very welcone!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When we have been bucked off a bull called love it is hard to get back on for another ride. That is when I say cowboy up.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yep...I agree.
thank you, Dale,
j.