So

So

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

So

 

 

 

indifference

is one state

short of comatose

and two states 

short of the expiration

date

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/30/22

© 2022 jacob erin-cilberto


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This is great.

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Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

thank you, light,
j.
Light and ashes

3 Years Ago

You are so very welcome.
Indifference is a pain in the backside. When that stage is reached in a relationship, you can be sure the significant other's heart is elsewhere dear J.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your words, Chris,
j.
A lady friend once told me the line between love and hate was indifference. Nice extension of thought, Jacob.

Winston

Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

thank you, Winston,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..