Questions without Punctuation

Questions without Punctuation

 

 

do you find me amusing

in the aftermath

of catastrophe's

party in my heart

 

the favors you took with you

the empty box

you left of my feelings

the party in your heart

 

I find you amusing

with nothing

of the something

of that thing 

we had corrupted

 

were we villains

felons

your talons

exposing the skin of my 

masochistic need

to be 

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/10/22

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to write a poem with a period. In my writing groups. I met many who didn't us Punctuation. A new sentence started with a capital letter. I need my punctuation. Thank you Jacob for sharing your amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and some do surely need it.
thanks, Coyote,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.

[Cassie]

This is a sad in a funny way, I always enjoy your way with words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Cassie...how are you?

[Chris Shaw]

catastrophe's
party in my heart

No mistaking here, the outcome of this relationship J. A disaster. Can you get anything worse than a catastrophe? I asked a question and added punctuation :) I like my poetry without punctuation. Such excellent work from you.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Chris,
j.

[Ken e Bujold]

I find punctuations only get in the way of questions. lead to all sorts of misunderstandings
love the poem J

[jacob erin-cilberto]

exactly...thank you, Ken,
j.