Towards the Sun

Towards the Sun

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Towards the Sun

when we bloom free
the roots below
smile



erin-cilberto
10/17/22

© 2022 jacob erin-cilberto


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Plants need a strong root system to be at their best. Same as trees. I liked this piece of brevity very much. Humans need strong roots too. We all need freedom to grow. Smiling is what makes the happy days. Creative and thought provoking J.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words, Chris,
j.
Impressive Jacob. To sum up so much in a mere 8 words, yet fill it with image and sense, says way more for saying less. It certainly captures the imagination. 😊

Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

thank you, Lorry,
j.
An infectious piece of effervescence that one can not help but smile along at its ending and message. One in which I endorse with a nod and my own smile. Nicely done my friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Carlos....we need more freedom to smile.
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..