Splendor's Paradox

Splendor's Paradox

 

 

 

in the trash pit

alee

a shade of scent

perpetually

the old hobo's

final resting place

 

no coffin

just crows

to feast

on his soul

while his heart becomes 

a winged creature

 

gathering data

on a God

who questions his own

intention...

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/23/22

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

So very sad. There is such loneliness in the world and to die alone is the saddest situation of all. A heartache of a poem J, and yet all too common.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...you understand.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob… so many Hobo’s that travel on the Rio Grand … to try to find a better way… only to discover a Trail of Tears. God left a Map that had no-where to settle when Ill Winds have become a Nightmare. Gravely, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that is so sad, Pat...
j.

[Fran Marie]

Such a sadness in this
one especially as the holiday
season draws near..to be thankful
yet there are so many alone dying
not only of being alone but of
loneliness itself with a broken
spirit..well penned and conveyed

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, so many, Fran...so sad,
Thank you, Fran, for your words,
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

How sad it is how many die alone and forgotn

[jacob erin-cilberto]

So many.....thank you, Dale,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Religion was supposed to be a spiritual mine, not a gold mine. Religion was intended to be a moral compass, not a political rumpus. Religion was geared for the unseen, not for the Hollywood screen.
SK22
Best wishes on your spiritual journey sir Jacob...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome 😊 sir Jacob.