Feast for the Beast

Feast for the Beast

love

is becoming a side dish

less prevalent

the meal is losing its meaning

we are too saturated with

the main entree

hate

erin-cilberto

11/23/22

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Evil has become the main dish… no change in the ingredients… we are overtaken with Power hungry Vultures. Only a Cross with Prayers can alter our main Course. gently, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that is what can alter...I appreciate your insightful words, Pat,
j.

[Ladysue]

This short poem packs a punch and it’s sadly true. No one wants to solve problems anymore. They want to unleash their hatred on people and it’s devastating. It starts at the top, down through some media and into those who have the propensity to unleash on people they don’t even know. Love this poem as it’s saids it all. The title is brilliant.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Ladysue,
j.

[Elaine]

So true, unfortunately. Again, the brevity of this packs a punch with the emphasis intended. Thank you for sharing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Elaine,
j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are sadly correct here. People treat love like a fad or game and hate like its a spectator's sport.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true, Dale...thanks for your understanding words,
j.

[DIVYA]

I can see the beast munching away on all the hate. I feel so sorry for love. Dining isn't for the tender hearted anymore. A very relatable poem with all the recent senseless killings and bloodshed around us.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, DIVYA,
j.

[Corset]

Good one J. Too much Meat and not enough potato XD

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Corset,
j.