Two Drifters

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Two Drifters

invert the love poem

reverse the feelings

stone cold collaboration

heart and pen

the page is lavender

but the ink frozen

into black ice.

erin-cilberto

5/2/23

© 2023 jacob erin-cilberto

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andrew mitchell

Somewhat dark and tragic Jacob, maybe drifters are escaping a broken promise unable to commit. Trust is a two way street.

Posted 2 Years Ago

2 Years Ago

Yes, and going down the opposite road facing traffic is deadly.
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Nima.Hope

3D imagination.........
Page of Lavender,cubes of black ice. I was thinking that we can turn Picasso paintings into 3D poems.
Enjoyed this unique piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago

2 Years Ago

thank you, Nima...
I feel like black ice sometimes...the words just slip away.

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Added on May 13, 2023
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Author

jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL

About

Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..