a most romantic poem

a most romantic poem

gestation

then devastation

love erupts

then explodes

corrupts

then erodes

erin-cilberto

8/14/23

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

Jeeeez jacob! Like I said in the other review, you give me heartburn!. I think you have gastropoetical distress. Word reflux. I have some poems to share after I catch up with everyone then you can get some relief. Plop plop, fizz fizz.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Word reflux....ha ha...thanks , William.

[Coyote Poetry]

A complete love story in eleven words. So amazing Jacob. This poem was outstanding my friend.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Coyote,
j.

[W. Barrett Munn]

what rough beast slouches toward Bethlehem? What color is eroded love?

Winston

[jacob erin-cilberto]

red, for a bleeding heart.
Thank you, Winston,
j.

[Soyam]

Sometimes... little are fulfilling ....

But corrupt is something, that not everyone will to have in their story. But unfortunately it's a part ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

too often.
thank you, Soyam,
j.

[Farjana Shah Chaity]

a beautiful 10-word story.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chaity,
j.

[NormaZ]

Short but sweet, that path that sometimes love travels. Nice work!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Norma,
j.

[Soren]

Romantic reality Jacob. Life is not a romantic novel with no bumps and dips. I cringe when I hear people say that they never had a fight, to me it's a red flag that they never loved. Great write. So much said in so few words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

They are either ready to explode into the worst love brawl or....yes...they haven't really loved.read moreThey are either ready to explode into the worst love brawl or....yes...they haven't really loved.
Thank you, Soren,
j.

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Jacob,

sadly as soberingly, Love may be Grand, but Life? ... Life's a B***h on a beach of pain engrained sand ever sifting through the annals' halls of the heart

Marve

[jacob erin-cilberto]

So well said, Marve...better than the poem itself.
j.

[Stella Armour]

Sometimes the most explosive passion dies as suddenly as it was born ... the brightest flame is not always the one that burns the longest .

[jacob erin-cilberto]

mellow and steady works...thank you, Stella,
j.