poem

poem

Ashes to dust and such

a rhythmic burning

left brain, right heart

yearning

resting

           on

the scattered you

erin-cilberto

9/1/23

Reviews

[Soren]

Yes Jacob left brain in this poetically written piece where words require that side. Right heart for without it you could not have felt it to write it. A very nice poem that leaves the mind yearning.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Soren,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Excellent word play here J. Such brevity which speaks volumes about the complexities of relationships.

the scattered you

What an ending! Great metaphor .

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris...this one was not the easiest to write...
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

"Ashes to dust and such" ... especially like that opening line big j. "left brain, right heart" clever word play if ever there were .. "poem" .. simply put and so complex we are .. makes me ponder all the more sir .. wishing you well always and thanks for sharing your stuff .. right here at the Cafe'
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, E.
j.