haiku # 205

haiku # 205

 

 

in a robin's eye

a glint of recognition

Thwarts the worm's progress

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/26/23

Reviews

[Desert Knave]

LOL. A perfect morning smile of a haiku. Nicely done. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Jim...

Lynda B. says hello...and that you have been friends a long time...she is a gem.

[Desert Knave]

Yes, Lynda is awesome.

[Dave Brown]

Very humorous

As the worm wiggles
something happens from above
orange and black last seen

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Dave.
if we want to go fishing, we had better catch them before the robins do.

[Chris Shaw]

I love robins J. I have on occasions left my kitchen door open to find that a robin has hopped in. Dropped in to say hello. Mostly though they stay close to the pond and the main bed of shrubs where the worms play.

This poem can be read on different levels. I don’t think of robins as having a killer streak.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I guess like everyone and everything else, they must survive.
thanks, Chris,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

In the eyes of the robin. Movement could be your last. Nice dance of words Jacob. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Coyote,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob… like threading the Eye of a Needle … Robins have a sense of timing when the movement in the Earth is Nature’s Gift. Robins were my First Bird acquaintance as a Child and now they Grace my Soul when they arrive in Spring. tenderly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

And it is weird, I always hear they are mean birds, but I have never seen it in them...
thank you, Pat,
j.