A long way to heaven for poets

A long way to heaven for poets.

I posted a review of your poem

then my review got reviewed

and so on and so on

until the original poem

ended up in limbo

no one remembered 

who wrote what, when and why

"ignore grammar and spelling" was said

somewhere along the line

or at the beginning of the rope

that eventually hung the poet

with a wry smile

and several reveiws layter.

erin-cilberto

12/21/23

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

You, jacob, could turn a pillow-case inside out and convert it into one of your poems - in fun time too! You seem able to touch funny bones as well as minds and hearts, sir. May your Friday be a peaceful and chuckling one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, em,
j.

[emmajoygreen]

You're welcome. :)

[Silmara McGarry]

Laughing....very clever dear Jacob O really enjoyed!!! Bravooo

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Silmara...glad I might give you a smile.
j.

[John Sullivan]

i hhad a chukle miself... grate litle peece/

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Ha ha, thanks, John,
j.

[NormaZ]

Ha, ha, loved your poem (she said reviewing)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Ha ha...you gave me such a smile this morning, Norma,
thanks,
j.

[living lavender]

the allure in this piece was dished out 10 fold.
i am not sure if that was english what i just typed.
{absolutely loved this one. bravo.}

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I do think it was...lavender.
Thank you,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

The fish took the bait on that line then hook line sinker !
Great write Jacob enjoyed it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

even if it was only a bluegill...it was worth the battle.
thanks, Julie,
j.

[Soren]

Was that my review? Or was that my poem? I loved this one Jacob only a true poet could end it the way that you did. I hope that this review does not result in the same outcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha, I think not.
thank you, Soren,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

ignore grammar and spelling I would never say, they are important. Reviewing the review made me smile. Some poems generate conversation. I am guilty of this myself. You are so funny and clever. You had the last word here dear J. Way to go:)

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris...I wish I had spelled the last word correctly...:)))

[Chris]

A wander-full circle affect.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris...
j.

[Stella Armour]

Guilty i am afraid especially with a few poets here who have become friends over the years, chit chat tends to happen on reviews...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Hey, chit chat is a good thing...
j.