eventually

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

eventually

kin blood

finds its path

through veins of separation

until two connect enough

to allow coagulation

and then

celebration

erin-cilberto

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© 2025 jacob erin-cilberto

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Poetic Beauty

Finding coagulation in kin’s blood isn’t always easy especially if there is a reason for the separation.

The reuniting can be a cause for celebration and joy.

This poem makes a profound statement of family coming together and finding way back.

Posted 12 Months Ago

12 Months Ago

And sometimes coagulation when there never was uniting in the first place.
thank you, P.B...... read more

12 Months Ago

You are welcome

MCS

What a powerful read in so few words. I've missed out on the coagulation and therefore missed the celebration.

Posted 12 Months Ago

12 Months Ago

Thank you for your words, Mary,
j.

Senu Jayasinghe

Wow. So concise but powerful.

Posted 12 Months Ago

12 Months Ago

Thank you, Senu,
j.

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Added on January 14, 2025
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Author

jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL

About

Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..