The Influential Second Hand of Infatuation

The Influential Second Hand of Infatuation

fifteen seconds ago

I fell in love with you

nine seconds ago

I no longer remembered you

four seconds ago

I felt sorry, and

empty

about something.

erin-cilberto

1/23/25

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Well, knowing the way you write I believe that this isn't what it seems on the surface...
I would hate to write my initial thoughts but I will say that I feel that it has to do with memory and ageing...
I loved it as I do all your work.
Lisasview, finally back to reviewing and writing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Ah, I appreciate your take, Lisa....
Thanks for the visit...
j.

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome Jacob

[Kim S.]

WOW! Powerful and to the point.
It hurts to fall out of love and the hurt lingers on.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your thoughts on this piece, Kim.
j.

[Desert Knave]

Wow. For its short nature this one speaks a lot to what infatuation can be. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Jim,
j.

[Stella Armour]

just a whim Jacob, initiating fond memories of a love no longer in your life..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

more like an almost love...:)))
Thank you, dear Stella.
j.