Breath

Breath

spring seed arrival

a summer's discontent grows

into fall's exhale 

erin-cilberto

5/5/25

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful well executed loved it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Julie.
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

beautiful, jacob! all of a man's life in three lines ... i sat quietly ... beautiful!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, E.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

The season of spring, one of rebirth and renewal, my favourite time of year. I am holding my breath that the unrest in the world won’t spoil the summer. The fall always signifies decay and dying to me. Wouldn’t it be lovely if we could grow peace from a packet of seeds. Thought provoking and visual dear J.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Me too, Dear Chris. Me too.
j.

[Beren]

It's amazing how you present so many images with so few words. Thank you for sharing sir.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind comment, Beren.
j.

[Pete]

all hail the haiku. here's hoping that it gargled with minty scope.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Let's hope so. Thanks, Pete.
j.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Achoo! 🤧 Pollen’s out in force and blistering summer sores… autumn 🍂 is calm and colourful. The seasonal aspect of haiku is fulfilled🙏🏻🕊️

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Freds,
j.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Most welcome, j 🙏🏻🕊 until next round then 👍🏻
Freds.

[Soren]

A wonderful Haiku that encompasses the full range of requirements the syllables in each line, the nature aspect, and the meaning of the movement. Lovely

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Soren,
j.

[John the Baptist]

The cycle of life condensed into seventeen syllables. I never cared much for Haiku, but I liked this one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Wow, thanks, John.
j.

[Kady R.]

What a wonderful Haiku here Jacob erin-cilbert. I like the use of seasons here it's very deep. It makes me thing of fall and how all the plants are getting ready for winter. Even though winter isn't here it's almost like it's indicated with "falls exhales." What a wonderful poem. Thanks again

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review, Kady.
j.

[Desert Knave]

A beautiful haiku with the perfectly placed seasonal references. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Jim.
j.