Senryu # 32

Senryu # 32

 

 

airliner met cliff

explosive greetings exchanged

strangers said goodbye

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

6/29/25

Reviews

[Kady R.]

Thank you for this Senryu this is the first time I've heard about Senryu. This one is pretty morbid but its the reality. Crashes happen sometimes although flight travel is supposed to be the safest, I have been hearing of more flight accidents. Thanks fir this senryu jacob!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, I am seldom, if ever, this straightforward when I write...but so many lately....I was actually thinking of Patsy Cline when I wrote this.
j.

[Kady R.]

I just read about her crash like wooowww in a sad way!! 😔😔😔

[DIVYA]

I connect this senryu to the Air India crash in Ahemedabad, India on June 12 2025.
My friend...People wrote reams and reams on it and here - you encapsulate a tragedy in all its soul shattering entirety in so few words...
Awesome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

That was one of the events I was thinking of when writing it...also maybe a trepidation about flying to Vermont...although it won't stop me from going.
thanks, Divya.
j.

[DIVYA]

I thought so too...
But you'll be fine and arriving in no time. :)
You're most welcome, dear Jacob.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

V good !
Like it a lot.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thanks, Julie.
j.

[Chris]

You're pretty up front with this one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes...and getting ready to fly soon, middle of the month. Oops.
thanks, Chris.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for connecting FlatDaddy and me...really like his work.
j.