Expectations and Just the Way it is

Expectations and Just the Way it is

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Expectations and Just the Way it is


my mom got old
my dad got old
I had to let them go
my silver hair reminds
that I got old

permanence is no promise
God doesn't expect what he made
in his own image
to last forever
he allowed us to be born, getting old

I read a lot of Sylvia Plath
she never got old
didn't give herself a chance to
was she made in God's image
if he were one of us
would he get old?
is his image aging?

I must let me go
God expects that
others will take my place
my mom's place
my dad's place

and they, too, will get old.
or more Sylvias
or Elvises
or Freddie Prinze Jrs
who will never get old.

erin-cilberto
7/3/25

© 2025 jacob erin-cilberto


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We are all only permanent until we no longer are Jacob. Until the last that remembered is gone and the lineage is broken.
If God has infinite wisdom as they say, perhaps he saw the fault in giving us eternal life. I mean, surely by now with how many tens of thousands of generations of people there has been, we'd be tripping over each other and would have to build thousand storey skyscrapers just to live, and even then we'd probably only be allowed out in some kind of dystopian/ hunger games type lottery, in case we trample each other to death.
Oh, and nice subliminal messaging that has left me humming American pie at the end! 😃

Posted 6 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

I agree with all you said and now I think I will drive my Chevy to the Levy and hope it's not dry.read more

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..