My Next Book

My Next Book

A Story by jacob erin-cilberto

I think my next book will be totally A.I. generated poems. And I will title it From the very depths of my heart and soul.

We are getting overrun with A.I. generated poems and reviews...The Humanness of this special genre of poetry
is being decapitated. The heart of writing has gone missing in so many instances.
So many writing this way or not writing this way surely have that creative gene in them. If only they would give it 
more of a chance to bloom.
I think a few others on here might agree. I hope we can save our fading genre.
j.

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In the same way as a microwave oven, ai is a useful tool and has a place; but no matter the complexity of the algorithm, the clue is in the word artificial and if you feed ai a lie disguised as data, it will doubtless feast to it's hearts content. As for ai writing any kind of meaningful poetry; I'd rather put my faith in the infinite monkey theorem.

A friend of mine has a truly lovely home, which she has populated with the most beautifully designed artifical flowers; but they have no fragrance and to me they are entirely insentient.

Wisely, I have chosen not to apprise my friend of my thoughts. :))

Beccy.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

You mean you would not be the first to read my new book and write a rave review of it?
I was .. read more
Beccy

5 Months Ago

For interest only I inputted three of my poem titles onto an ai poetry writing site. Quite bizarre r.. read more
Ms claws

5 Months Ago

Wise words from such a small tyke! (smiles) Is AI capable of emotion? example: Your words touch me s.. read more



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J., I have heard much about A.I., but I must confess I am not yet able to recognize it. I will continue to write from the heart and gut.

Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

It is the very real way to write, John.
j.
Although some might say that they experiment with AI to see how close it may come to human art or even surpass it I believe that most of those that use it do it out of fear of their own inadequacies feeling incapable of creating a poem on their own and wishing for accolades they pretend to have written what AI has trying to claim its glory. Although some AI poems seem quite good they have no soul and as such to me are zombies like synthetic music worthless what one may listen to in an elevator or while on hold on the phone. A poem without a human touch cold, lifeless, plastic copy of something living.

Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

Yes, no soul...been teaching writing for 30 plus years...A.I. is so easy to spot...distant, very thi.. read more
Soren

5 Months Ago

You are most welcome my friend
A long time ago our youngest son told us his math teacher would let his students use a calculator in his class ... I told him "no'
He asked why not ... I told him I knew how smart a calculator was but I need to know how smart you are.

I've been writing for well over 70 years now ... and everything I turn out has been pounded and kneaded and provoked into life. Not all of it is good ... in fact most of it isn't ... but every now and then one pops up that makes me think it's still worth doing.

AI may be able to copy but can it develop a soul?

There are gifted writers here and varying degrees of ability but they all produce something they have sweated over ... worked and reworked to make their words suit their the intention.
Will AI put that work into it?

Keep fighting my friend ... for we must.

Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

I put two of my titles into A.I.. in ten seconds I had two poems...now that is "sweating over an ide.. read more
I think the root of the problem is notoriety. People want attention and they're not willing to put in the work. They'd rather take a shortcut. It stems from online clicks and AI is the perfect tool for that. I saw a video online yesterday featuring a woman talking but I knew something was wrong. I just couldn't tell what it was. Reading further below the word more, it turned out she wasn't real. It was an AI model.

Everything is turning artificial. Real poetry, real writing of articles and books, they're all in danger. Even voices on videos are fake. Think 1984 and big brother's demolition of facts and the changing of history.

Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

we are fighting for our human survival...thank you, Relic.
j.
It is a strange world when the bots are the only ones supportive of many new works. Oh well, I'll share till the robo-masters alt-control-delete me. Nice write. ~Jim

Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

Real people, real poetry...in danger of becoming extinct.
thank you, Jim.
j.
Perhaps 'normal' writers should request, sign petitions - et al, that Al displays it 'proud as punch to be what it is' sign. IF it is satisfied with, proud of its uses in literature, why not ADVERTISE the fact. Honesty is best when it comes being top of this or that week's Best of the Lot.

Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

Thank you, yes, em. Your poetry, as well as several others on this site, has soul...A.I. cannot put .. read more
Dear Jacob,
Poetry was already fading and this onslaught of AI is the final straw breaking the proverbial old camel's back. People who cant string two sentences together are dishing out reams of AI generated stuff and passing it off as their's. I'm now wondering if theres any point in continuing. Thanks to these lovely AI Poets, AI is learning poetry fast. Can we even compete with automation? So why take the trouble at all?

Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

I remember my English 101 class back in 1968 at SIU.
We didn't even know what computers were... read more
DIVYA

5 Months Ago

I can relate very much to that. The stilted verses, awkward lines, amateurish expressions. But so t.. read more
I am eagerly awaiting your 26th collection and can guarantee there won’t be a hint of AI anywhere. It kills creativity and lacks human emotion. It is not the art of poetry. It saddens me that so many are going down this line j. Wake up posters. Poetry is real art, AI is not. It’s in the name, artificial.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Months Ago

It saddens me as well, Chris.
The real poets have to keep the genre alive and real.
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..