What is real and what is not.

What is real and what is not.

A Story by jacob erin-cilberto

Even if it is not great poetry, please keep it real and human.
AI is being used so much here these days. We are losing the reality of our wonderful genre.
Even several reviews are AI generated.
It is really sad. Poetry needs to come from the real heart...not a computer generated one.
j.

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Stop using AI to evaluate other writers. Use your own knowledge that you went to university for. You say you were an educator for 30 years, yet you are using an AI tool an AI detector, you say... and now calling yourself an expert. But you're still using AI! That's the whole problem and issue is you're using AI and AI is poison to a writing community.

Jacob says: "There is an Ai detector that will tell us the probability of something being AI"

I'm calling out the blatant HYPOCRISY! You hypocrites! You're using AI yourself! You fool!

AI "Probability " The gum stuck underneath the desk of school children is worth more than the opinion and probability of your stupid AI bot!

Keyword: AI DETECTOR IS STILL AI! he is copy and pasting other writers works into an AI to evaluate other writers for PROBABILITY! so he is basing all his findings not on his own knowledge but on the AI's Probability of the writers work being "AI generated " how can we trust this. A man who claims to be an educator with 30 years experience is basing everything on the probability from a stupid AI. When did someone brain get replaced by AI. So lazy to just copy and paste and have the AI give you probability then get outraged at a young writer and make want to commit suicide.

I give you permission to take this comment and stick it up that AI detector rear end, where your head and brain is so far up in!
Has the AI become poetry viagra for you, just stick to the blue pill next time. Too much AI is not good for aging brains!
xxx
Vanessa

Also, the copy and pasted works get uploaded into the data of the AI detector? What? Stop copy and pasting other writers and just read and evaluate it on the site. Don't copy and paste it into that stupid bot!

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I submit AI cannot create true aphorisms or poetry to match that of Lee, Seong-bok.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

I submit that is truth, Winston.
Nothing beats the human word.
j.
I agree. There's an awful lot about these modern days that have lost me, and AI has the potential to be the worst. Looking around, I have to wonder if AI is attacking you right now. (re: the angry one below)

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

That is an interesting supposition, Samuel...AI attacking me now...perhaps. But like Lincoln said, ".. read more
Jacob,
Personally, I think every submission should require a disclaimer, is there no way to check? Is a ban even possible? Of all the crap that has been flying around Western Civilization over the last twenty-five years, this development is the absolute shittiest. Have you seen the post about the fake country music song that made the charts... I'm not sure if it reveals how banal the current Country Music industry is these days or on how good Ai is...
Is there something missing here in this thread? Some of the comments seem to be complete non-sequiturs barely related to your post...
Vol

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

Yeah, this one is going all over the place, Vol.
Everyone is entitled to his or her opinion.... read more
AMEN!!!!!! Thank you J.....

Posted 1 Month Ago


Okay, Papa J, I'm a little lost here. Yeah, I've been busy elsewhere, as you probably know, so I'm a little out of touch with what's going on here. Can you fill me in? But first: I didn't do it. I wouldn't do it. I don't know anyone who IS doing it. But I sure would like to know what the hell is going on.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

AI is being used to make poems and reviews...and so often we are not getting human writing.
T.. read more
Relic

1 Month Ago

It applies to music to. A song in five seconds, lyrics in five seconds.
FlatDaddy

1 Month Ago

Well, doesn't that just suck! Why don't they just make their AI write poems and/or songs about how f.. read more
Stop using AI to evaluate other writers. Use your own knowledge that you went to university for. You say you were an educator for 30 years, yet you are using an AI tool an AI detector, you say... and now calling yourself an expert. But you're still using AI! That's the whole problem and issue is you're using AI and AI is poison to a writing community.

Jacob says: "There is an Ai detector that will tell us the probability of something being AI"

I'm calling out the blatant HYPOCRISY! You hypocrites! You're using AI yourself! You fool!

AI "Probability " The gum stuck underneath the desk of school children is worth more than the opinion and probability of your stupid AI bot!

Keyword: AI DETECTOR IS STILL AI! he is copy and pasting other writers works into an AI to evaluate other writers for PROBABILITY! so he is basing all his findings not on his own knowledge but on the AI's Probability of the writers work being "AI generated " how can we trust this. A man who claims to be an educator with 30 years experience is basing everything on the probability from a stupid AI. When did someone brain get replaced by AI. So lazy to just copy and paste and have the AI give you probability then get outraged at a young writer and make want to commit suicide.

I give you permission to take this comment and stick it up that AI detector rear end, where your head and brain is so far up in!
Has the AI become poetry viagra for you, just stick to the blue pill next time. Too much AI is not good for aging brains!
xxx
Vanessa

Also, the copy and pasted works get uploaded into the data of the AI detector? What? Stop copy and pasting other writers and just read and evaluate it on the site. Don't copy and paste it into that stupid bot!

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I'm just so confused how that even works. So I can take just about anyone's poem and submit it to an AI tool and just ask the AI to evaluate it? How can we trust what the AI says? Why are you using AI to evaluate other writers. Stop using AI. Human should evaluate human. So you use AI to evaluate for AI by submitting human written work and what if the AI takes credit for good writers? I feel this is to discredit the young writers because its clear old writers who are using AI to evaluate work and probably using it to write their own work too.

Jacob says: "There is an Ai detector that will tell us the probability of something being AI"

I'm calling out the blatant HYPOCRISY! You hypocrites! You're using AI yourself! You fool!

AI "Probability " The gum stuck underneath the desk of school children is worth more than the opinion and probability of your stupid AI bot!

Keyword: AI DETECTOR IS STILL AI! he is copy and pasting other writers works into an AI to evaluate other writers for PROBABILITY! so he is basing all his findings not on his own knowledge but on the AI's Probability of the writers work being "AI generated " how can we trust this. A man who claims to be an educator with 30 years experience is basing everything on the probability from a stupid AI. When did someone brain get replaced by AI. So lazy to just copy and paste and have the AI give you probability then get outraged at a young writer and make want to commit suicide.

I give you permission to take this comment and stick it up that AI detector rear end, where your head and brain is so far up in!
Has the AI become poetry viagra for you, just stick to the blue pill next time. Too much AI is not good for aging brains!
xxx
Vanessa

Also, the copy and pasted works get uploaded into the data of the AI detector? What? Stop copy and pasting other writers and just read and evaluate it on the site. Don't copy and paste it into that stupid bot!

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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ShadesofV

1 Month Ago

Don't you have 12 year old girls to "mentor" and harass. Jacob is an adult. He should be able to han.. read more
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It's sad that folk are passing off AI generated writing as their own.
I wish I could rewind this site back 10+ years and resurrect those now sadly passed. It was a great place back then to learn, with the help of you and others Jacob, ones craft.
Hope you are keeping well

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

I know it is sad and time won't reverse itself...but those who write what is 100% their own, help to.. read more
What's hard is when it's not so obvious anymore. I find the clear stuff a lot easier to deal with personally; still irritating but easier to take. When it gets harder to tell, I just feel like I'm being manipulated.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

I definitely can agree there...the manipulation...
I will keep fighting for legitimacy in wri.. read more
You should call them out the minute they leave a machine-generated review on yiur page.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

Been doing that...and defriending.

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Added on November 14, 2025
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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..