Poemfall

 

Poemfall

 

 

I see white

spreading on the ground

a refrain

distributed 

like a line of cocaine

refreshing flurries

a sniff of albino air

I get high on nature

it's safer.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/29/25

Reviews

[Lorry]

That word should be in the dictionary of obscure sorrow, which i would highly recommend to all poets. Its about how emotions are felt rather than spoken, so the author - John Koenig decided to give those feelings names, so your poemfall could read...
POEMFALL - The feeling of joy felt when you realise after a moment of anger how beautiful and poetic snowdrops look. 😆

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like that...yes, poets with their license get to make up words...whether language purists like it or not.
Isn't poetry Creative Writing?
Thank you...
j.

[Dale Pavolko]

Your flurry lines are devastating.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Dale.
j.

[Laz K.]

I was about to think, "wow, you really get down," before I quickly realized what's going on. Just shows how good a writer you are. :)

Comparing snow to coke, and the phrase "albino air" are genius.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am a blue collar poet...just keep at it. And I appreciate your kind words, Laz.
j.

[Desert Knave]

Nothing like the first "line" of snow each year to remind us that nature's high is the best high. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

absolutely, Jim...Absolutely.

[Light and ashes]

Brilliant............. brilliance is it's own reward.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Light.
j.

[Light and ashes]

You're very welcome.

[Jimmy Crapped Corn]

albino air is not a term I've ever heard associated with miss cocaine, but it works

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Jimmy.
j.

[MomzillaNC]

It wouldn't have occured to me to look at snow that way. Lol

Clever

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, MomZ.
j.

[MomzillaNC]

yvw 🌨️