Senryu # 1002

Senryu # 1002

 

screaming woman smiles

accelerator jeering

shots accumulate

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/21/26

Reviews

[BuzzyB]

An interesting senryu. The jeering accelerator was conspiring with mishap. Violence prevailed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

And there was no way she was aiming at anybody.
thank you, BB.

[Desert Knave]

Damn. I have avoided writing about Renee Good until the anger resides a bit ... I am sure that will be soon (maybe). Excellent write in few words. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Jim.
I cannot stop venting, I am so afraid for several of my friends.

[Chris]

This one has whispers
that appear behind my eyes...
questions aren't answers.

There are many ways to take -
a thought full person's echoes.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris...tough times.
j.

[Michael Sun Bear]

I used to drink with people like you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I don't drink but am about to be driven to it by all that is happening.
Thanks for the visit, Michael.
j.