Senryu #1003

Senryu #1003

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Senryu # 1003

 

 

below zero sentiment

icy index points to exit

lock clicks

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/21/26

© 2026 jacob erin-cilberto


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Locking people out and alienation is a cold place to live. Thought provoking

Posted 2 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Soren.
j.
The words seem so cold and final in this senryu. Someone isn't welcome. And that's so sad.

Posted 2 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

goodbyes can be very cold.
thank you, BB.

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 Added on January 24, 2026
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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



About
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..