Peace of Mind

An ethereal poem, about that lingering moment of stillness and gratitude on a pleasant day

And so these peaceful rivers flow
Somberly through me. The source unknown.

A warm breeze hangs loftily above my shoulders
Letting leaves fall wherever they please
As a gentle presence floating over
Lets loving whispers bring my mind to its knees.

Now that this wellspring of joy has been found
Let it wash my soul 'till clean and unbound.

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Reviews

[Stella Armour]

Now this was a pleasure to find , a lovely serene write ...so calming :)

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It's a pleasant way to start a pleasant day for me...your poem actually does spell lovely natural vibes....though it's little but I won't lie, as per me it's fresh and spring like energetic...breeze, leaves, river all the detailing are making me carve to make a return ticket to spring or to wheel the season so fast and still it in the spring!
Great written buddy! Feels refreshed😊