I could have been Your Sunshine, Your Only Sunshine.

I could have been Your Sunshine, Your Only Sunshine.

A Poem by Last Lying Look
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Uhm. I was pretty bored & decided to screw around with the "You are my sunshine" song.

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I wanted to be your sunshine.

Your only Sunshine.

To make you happy.

When skies are grey.

You'll never know ,dear,

how much I loved you.

Because you pushed your sunshine away.

 

The other night, dear,

As I lay sleeping

I dreamt you loved me again.

When I awoke, dear,

I was terribly mistaken.

And I hung my neck from the stair case.

 

I was your sunshine.

Your only sunshine.

Until I turned your blue skies to grey.

You'll never know, dear,

how much I loved you.

Because your sunshine slipped away.

 

© 2008 Last Lying Look


Author's Note

Last Lying Look
Uhm. I was pretty bored & decided to screw around with the "You are my sunshine" song. I'm sure it's been done before.

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Dark and twisted, and well done at that.

Posted 16 Years Ago


If you sing this at a party you will definitely floor everyone to silence..ha ha! I'ts cute... morbid...and, hmmm...shocking! Hey, writing should be fun too! I loved it!

Posted 17 Years Ago


you know what this was amazing
wow both versions are like really sad


Posted 17 Years Ago


What a great spoof of that song. Well done.

Posted 17 Years Ago


it's gooooddd !

Posted 17 Years Ago



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