Peeing Makes You Smarter

fun poem :D

Up on that toilet

Like it's a thrown

You can truly be proud

To call it your own

 

 

Peeing makes you smarter

It teaches you to let go

&it's something we all must do

It's something we all know

 

 

You do what you have to do

Then wash your hands

& move on, going back

To the world & it's demands

 

 

Author's Note

the 'peeing makes you smarter' is a joke between a friend and I.

Reviews

[Jen]

PS, this is ballin :)

[Sandy sunday]

:P

[Charles D. Moorer]

I agree completely!

[soulsearching]

i gave you 100 for it was at least a new supject.. lol

[Mysty Rayn]

This is so great!!!! It put a big smile on my face. I love it.

[John Stussy]

Well, the logic is applicable. Would never have thought of peeing this way. Good job on an original metaphor.