Ek Tarfa Pyaar

It's about one sided love, an unaccomplished love and desire for someone

Jab Pyaar karna kisi ko ek saza ban jaaye, 

Jab kisi ko ek ankh bharke dekhna bhi ek kami ho jaaye, 

Jab kisi k ek phone ek msg ka aap ghanto intezar karne lag jaaye, 

Jab kisi ke bare mein sochkar aankhon mein moti aajaye, 

Jab kisi ki beparwaiyaan bhi teer ki tarah dil mein chubne lag jaaye...

Tab samajh jaana mere dost ke aap ek tarfa ishk mein doob Chuke hain...

Author's Note

It's in Hindi

Reviews

[Brad Dehler]

UPDATE:
Is this a good translation Isha?
When love becomes a trap for someone,
When even looking at someone with one eye becomes a deficiency,
When you start waiting for hours for one phone or one message from someone,
When thinking of someone's naked, pearls came in the eyes,
When someone's indifferent too starts pecking in the heart like yours...

Then understand that you have drowned in one sided love of my friend...

Please let me know if this is spot on, or if the specific words do not do it justice. Is it true about the one sided love, that there is a sensual yearning/love for a friend?
ANd what about the naked line? About pearls in the eyes? It is the 4th line down, what exactly are you telling us?

[EshaA]

Hey Brad, this is a wonderful translation of my poem from Hindi to English. The fourth and last line says When thinking about someone brings tears in your eyes, then my friend you know you have lost control on yourself and have immersed yourself completely into one sided love.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you. Yes, i'll have to translate this. About one sided love, an unaccomplished love and desire for someone- is this a real someone to you?