Specks

Just a little something... I guess I lost the original thought and this is what I got instead.

Tiny specks of paint
getting in the way
blocking the reflection
and turning my attention
towards the careless over spray

irrelevant mistake
i shouldn't even care
but this stupid observation
that the painter was complacent
is hanging in the air

my mind has shifted tracks
the original thought is gone
my brain tries hard to retrace it
but i guess i should just face it
the stupid specks have won

Reviews

[~ Stefanie ~]

Wow, you say you lost your original thought process with this? I think it is excellent the way it turned out. It definitely leaves the reader thinking and trying to interpret what it is about (which could be in a variety of different ways) I really liked the uniqueness to this piece. Very enjoyable and fun to read! Thank you for sharing this

[paparapapa]

This poem is open to a lot of interpretations which is an amazing thing. And I love the symbolism that you have used here. Loved it. :)

[Kim]

Poetic and strong!
I like this, there's a lot of emotion in it.
Amazing write.