Whatever Gods May Be

the moonlight plays
across the rippling seas
and i am rendered speechless
and brought to my knees
the moon is a beacon
to the stars' consoling eyes
whose light softly glistens
off the tears loosed from my cries
calm of night can not suppress
this war that's waged in me
as i silently pray
to whatever gods may be

Author's Note

...feeling a little sad and reflective on the last underway I will be taking onboard the ship I have been stationed on for the last 5 years.

Reviews

[Becky Clancy]

I thought that it was rather sweet (:

[André-J-Franklin]

Love the beautiful imagery in this!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

It's Keanu:) I love this poem so much I want to marry it. Vivd imagery and an excellent read. One thing, captialize the first letter in each line and "I".