You and I

How did we happen? You and I. 

For the longest time we were

strangers passing by.

While my thoughts were swirling

in countless fantasies wondering

with whom I'm meant to be. 

You already had your brown eyes

set on me.

One conversation led to another

and closer friends we became. 

I never thought my lips would smile

when they spoke your name. 

Friends is all I ever thought we'd be.

My life changed when 

You and I became We.

Author's Note

Something quick. Decided to write something with that special someone on my mind :)

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Aww, this is so cute! I love how simple and fairy-tale like this is, and how there seem to be multiple layers of emotions and secrets hidden beneath what is told within the poem. I could relate to this piece 100%, and I think that you've written this in a way that makes it accessible and relatable to everyone who reads this. The last stanza is perfectly adorable. :)
~PaperHearts

[Liz-z]

AW! It's soo cute! I loved the thought of the feelingg... the feeling of possibility... eh, not sure if that was an excellent description, but I'm hoping you get that I liked it! xD lol It really was nice! :D

[Steve]

Very sweet! Sounds like a nice card.......

[River Wilson]

Thats sweet, and written well.
Id love to see more like this, the emotion behind this is obviouse.
It makes your writting more colourfull.
Good Work!

[Boantlers]

Got to love beautiful brown eyes, and feel lucky if we are loved by them.

Nice write.

[Kelley]

Great poem. I love it when friends become more.
Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Robin]

lovely expression of the progression of love