Goodnight

My first haiku...

Stars have been turned off.

The night sky is cold and black.

God must be sleeping.

Reviews

[L.C. Jarrette]

nice haiku there ethan. since haiku is short, some may think it's pretty easy to compose, well i'm not sure about that...how you have to compress everything into a 17 syllable poem and convey the message through implication and expression of allusion . a poem written in this form is very difficult for me. good job!

[Ethan]

Thanks you!

[Anjali]

Oh....it's a good one. I liked it, not much like your other poems, but I did liked it!

[Ethan]

Very true, I'm trying to refine my abilities. Thanks for the review!

[Anjali]

You are welcome!

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's really nice ..very good haiku

[Ethan]

Thank you. Great profile picture as well xD

[Farhan Shaikh]

Oh thanx☺ .

[Najam Us Saher]

Nice one for a first try...

[Ethan]

Thanks Najam

[Najam Us Saher]

you're welcome.

[Gee]

If indeed there is a God he has been sleeping for a very long time, and when not sleeping it seems he sits on his hands.

[Ethan]

Haha this was in no way a commentary on religion. Just a poem from the eye of a child. Regardless, thank you very much :)

[Sofia]

Wow! This is lovely..I loved it so much..It's really magical and beautiful... thanks for sharing :)

[Ethan]

Thanks Sofia :)

[Sofia]

Most welcome :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

or he has failed to pay his electric bill!

this is quite perfect, actually.

[Ethan]

Haha thank you :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Very worthy Ethan. So good to read your different forms and all done so very well. I think this more senyru than haiku?

[Ethan]

Haha yes you're right. I wasn't even aware that senyrus existed. Thanks anyway :)

[rowan.taylorrr]

i love this!! well done ethan!

[Ethan]

Thanks :)))))

[Raven Moonchild]

(applauds) Brilliant job!!! :D GOOOOOOOOO ETHAN!!!!!!! :D

[Ethan]

Thanks as always Raven :)

[wordman]

sounds like a lonely place

[Ethan]

Indeed :PP