The Ending

I wanted you to look out your window tonight and look at the moon

I wanted you to hold me tight and never move

I needed you to tell me what you feel inside

I needed you to show me the things that you try to hide

I couldn't wait to be your's one day

I couldn't  wait to carry your last name

But I didn't expect it to come that soon

And I didn't know you loved her too

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Nice the ending doesnt always come out good thats life

[bluessadmood]

Oh how nice ,too bad the end is sad ,but thats life
Wanted you to look out of your window tonight and see the moon
wanted you to hold me tight and never move
Wanted you to show me things you hide
want to be yours one day
wanted to carry your name
bit it was her all the way
What a lovely start,oh how love could take sudden turns
and what a sad end..I wonder if he know how he felt..
lovely write..

[Poetic Injustice]

Oh this strikes home. Concise. Direct. Well penned. One extra o on the end is all I recommend. And thanks for adding me as a friend. =0)