My List

1.) Our first kiss

2.) After two years together you still get to me

3.) Three days together without anyone around

4.) Four years I spent with you

5.) Five hours we stayed awake on the phone

6.) After six days of not seeing me you cried when you saw me

7.) After seven days you said "I Love You"

8.) Eight dozen roses on our first valentines day

9.) Nine hour drive to mississppi together to see your brother( we stopped alot)

10.) Ten sleepless hours wondering if you were going to be ok after a car accident

11.) You spent eleven days at my house with out leaving when I hurt my leg

12.) Twelve miles between your house and mine ( traveled often)

13.) Thirteen times you said "I Love You" before you left my house

14.) Fourteen times you called me before I called you back ( you almost cried at the sound of my voice)

15.) After fifteen monthes you proposed....and I said YES...

16.) At  sixteen you broke my heart

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

lol i liked that

[John McGrael]

wow.... i really enjoyed reading this!!

i thought it was gonna have a happy ending, but then boom, twist
(i like endings like that more than happy endings though)

[Fallen Angel]

Beautiful.

[Poetic Injustice]

"16.) At age sixteen you broke my heart"

That was unexpected on so many levels!

What an interesting piece.