Waiting

He walked through the door

And grabbed her by the hand

He pulled her up to him

ANd made her stand

He looked into her eyes

And her into his

He whipered softly

"Where have you been?

"I have been right here." she answered him

"No, I mean where have you been my whole lif."  he corrected himself

"Waiting on you."she simply said

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

i like it

[Eagle Cruagh]

This must be Love at First Grab.

I admire a girl who can read a grab,
just like that. No foolin `round, you
know right now what he wants and------

Gotta go grab me some lunch.

I love the way you structure your little
poems and the stories they tell .

You spell good !

You don`t kid around like me---- there is
all kinds of good things to be said for you.

But, when push comes to shove------------
My rating is -----100 %

------ Eagle Cruagh

[decoraz]

nice... you know... it REALLY should be that simple, direct and warm and secure and protective...thanks for sharing it..


and thank you for reading my poem also

J

[Starting Over]

Awe! Happy this is good!

[...memoirs of a dream....]

That's great! I really enjoy it and feel the full connection at the last line and it feels like real love. Great work!

[Jessi Webb =)]

This is amazing . It is so sweet . I think this is every girls dream, I would love this to happen with me .