Horrible Whisper - Yes I am

Scariest whispers !!

Horrible Whisper - Yes I am

I may be the toughest part you ever live

I may be the sourest taste you ever taste

I may be the scariest dream you ever see &

I may be the cheapest thing you ever have

May be I am true for what I said, AM I?

I may be dead for you in this life

I may be bitter with the reality phase

I may be troubling through your whole way &

I may be a puzzle for your mind set

May be I am true for what I said, AM I?

I may be a darker cloud for you to stay

I may be a devil for you to tackle with

I may be a worst thing ever happens &

I may be a most frustrating thing for you to face

May be I am true for what I said, AM I?

Yes I Am, a whisper in my ears ...

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Mirra]

Love the imagery of this poem. Well penned!

[Briana O'Connor]

This was great. I hung on every word. The way you described each phrase gave me goosebumps! Thank you for sharing.

[Eve Ola]

your words add more value to my work. Thank you :)

[Michael Stevens]

excellent imagery, excellent poem!

[Eve Ola]

Thank you :)

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Love the magical imagery and the beautiful references. So exquisitely done.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Susan for such kind words :)

[Kurayami]

This is good. I like the daring tone in the poem.

~Kurayami

[Eve Ola]

thanks :)

[Wandering Minstrel]

I love this, your words, your phrases, so powerful, strong, gripping, kept me moving smoothly through this

[Eve Ola]

Thank you so much for such kind words :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

AM I right if I say that you write wonderful poems and beautiful lines those are too good to read and too fine to perceive in real life hmm then the answer is YES I AM!

[Eve Ola]

that's so sweet n encouraging :) I really appreciate your words Thanks again :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Glad that you like it welcome friend!

[Aprille]

I like this one, its structure and honesty. Well done. :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Olive your reviews made my day :) Stay around

[Aprille]

My pleasure, as always. :)

[anne]

Wow....so well structured and so well penned.......

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for kind feedback :)