Horrible Whisper - Yes I am

Scariest whispers !!

Horrible Whisper - Yes I am

I may be the toughest part you ever live

I may be the sourest taste you ever taste

I may be the scariest dream you ever see &

I may be the cheapest thing you ever have

May be I am true for what I said, AM I?

I may be dead for you in this life

I may be bitter with the reality phase

I may be troubling through your whole way &

I may be a puzzle for your mind set

May be I am true for what I said, AM I?

I may be a darker cloud for you to stay

I may be a devil for you to tackle with

I may be a worst thing ever happens &

I may be a most frustrating thing for you to face

May be I am true for what I said, AM I?

Yes I Am, a whisper in my ears ...

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

I bet for each bad thing you have a counter that's twice as nice. :-)
Enjoyed this one eva.

[Matching Socks]

:-)
I'm ahead of the curve I guess. Thought it looked familiar!

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Ance for stopping by :)

[Matching Socks]

Anytime my dear! :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful use of words and thoughts. I like how you led to the very nice ending. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

really appreciate ur words Coyote Thanks :)

[vaishnavi]

i totally agree with ssadd u r not a horrible whisper yea it is true that some times we feel we r very odd as the world hate us but then later things get sort out but from my other mind says that i can totally relate with your writing that feelings are filed by me right now by the way keep on cheering and loving life and surely life will love you :)

[Eve Ola]

You're right :) Thank you I really appreciate it n i feel glad to see you around :)

[vaishnavi]

your welcome

[Saddam]

You are not.
Wake up from your dream of horrific platform, and see the crimson lights of sun.
Your self talky make me crazy. It is fantastic thought.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Saddam for your nice words :)

[Saddam]

your most welcome always

[Tricia Pattinson]

I liked the reversal of "I Am" to self questioning, self validating, self realizing...good poem!

[Eve Ola]

I am glad you like it . Thanks alot :)