This Girl at Seaside - Clifton

This Girl at Seaside - Clifton

I always wish to go there
As I lost myself there
Every time I am thinking of this side
As the one is calling me at seaside

 Calming relation we both have
Silence and roaring all we have
Sharing feelings with striking waves
As rolling my secrets deep in the waves

Lets start with morning dew
A morning time with the sea
With striking sun shine at its back
With opened arms & closed eyes
Inhaling calmness all inside
Bare foots in wetty sand
And calming waves altogether
Feeling peace all around
Striking peace with hidden sounds
Just feeling all in my ears in my eyes
As its more wonderful then my words!

Another time at late night
No one there in the dark light
But striking shine by the moon
And skipping sand by my foot
Feeling that you calling me inside
Oh! lets talk for a while
Wanna share my thoughts few
I am lonely just like You

I come again with day light
Everyone there with the cheers
But I am meeting you with my fears
Took a ride with camel dear
Hidden sounds striking my ears
That's, Its all about life
The ups the downs
The shines the darkness
The cheers the fears
Its a nature way for telling me clear
That nothing lasts forever there

Lastly,
A wish remains inside again
That I want you to meet dear Rain
Want you both with,
Pouring rain, Striking waves
Bare footed, Soaking sand
Opened arms, Closed eyes
So call him too with my Other Half too
I hugged you all with my deep love glue !!

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Penny]

There is the emotion called 'Love for the unknown ethereal partner or mate' which was found in the poetry of India's famous poetess of last century 'Mahadevi Verma' and you have captured truly in this piece. Soul stirring and very visual.

[Joey Martinez]

Very beautiful, such a great read. very nice!

[Eve Ola]

Thank you so much Joey :)

[Sami Khalil]

You write and tell it in a beautiful and touching ways...Bravo.................

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).. .

[Coyote Poetry]

"A wish remains inside again
That I want you to meet dear Rain
Want you both with,
Pouring rain, Striking waves
Bare footed, Soaking sand
Opened arms, Closed eyes"
I have the same wish as above. My favorite place is the sea. You held my attention to the last words.Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

thanks for such a sweet feedback i really apperciate :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your words.

[Eve Ola]

:) .

[Ayushi]

You have maintained a nice link in your write.
Overall lovely and soothing.
Very well written :)

[Eve Ola]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate :)

[Avinash]

Its very soft and beautiful poem and forcing people to plan their next vacation somewhere close to the sea.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Avinash... whenever i read such kind of related piece i feel myself in n want to be a part of it.

[vaishnavi]

so true and lovely poem
i like it with whole heart and the scene at the sea shore walking and leaving footprints behind...
well written :)

[Eve Ola]

sweet. Thank you so much :)

[vaishnavi]

your welcome :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

wow Eve... such a warm read...

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Swaroop :)

[Saddam]

That's, Its all about life
The ups the downs
The shines the darkness
The cheers the fears
Its a nature way for telling me clear
That nothing lasts forever there.

So true and visual. When someone happy face meet another persone, found first is not as happy as you are. Aloneness, so come talk to me, alone soul cried for someone.....

Feeling that you calling me inside
Oh! lets talk for a while
Wanna share my thoughts few
I am lonely just like You

[Eve Ola]

i really appreciate your comment. Thanks for stopping by :)