Splashy Raining & Dancing Girl

Its Raining here :D

Splashy Raining & Dancing Girl

Hey! come up here come up here
Its raining here raining here
Lift your faces up towards
Droplets moving just towards
With closed eyes feeling peace
The moment just I wanna freeze
Inhaling nature with my breath
Moving inward at its bests
Striking sounds to my ears
Its raining raining Oh my dears
Its falling down with the joy
Dipping soaking like a toy
Droplets here catching attention
Creating peace & kicking tension
Lifting toes with these dances
Moving around with the glances
As dancing girl with rainy drops
She is feeling on the tops
Wanna go on longer drive
Longer the road longer the ride
Sprinkling droplets on the screen
Splashy water here you been
Foggy window with my art
I love them all by my heart
Splashy puddles by other side
Making surrounding full of pride
Oh dear rain please stay for long
As your falling sound is soothing song


~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[J. K. Beach]

Eve--Your words fall easily down the page like a brief mountain shower. I love the playfulness here. Good job!

[Eve Ola]

Oh I am so glad you enjoyed. A positive feedback specially for you is really so inspiring and encouraging. Thanks a lot :)

[A. Amos]

Truly enjoyed the read. This is really well done:) great work

[Eve Ola]

Thank you Amos I am glad you enjoyed :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem for the rain. A peaceful rain on a warm day allowed us to enjoy the day. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Coyote it was really so enjoyable today :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Salem]

ohh
you are lucky there :(

[Eve Ola]

yes :D had great fun today :)