Life is Still Very Dear

Life is Still Very Dear

My days are distressing and nights are hard
My life seems like a darker graveyard

My life is coming, with cunning tricks
Moving my life with mix bricks

I love people a lot, living around me
But still my 'life show' is cruel as you see

Who will stop this running show?
I want to stop all but don't know how?

Against all these demons,life is still very Dear
That my loved ones told me very clear

I have questions to my life as well
You have to answer all as you know well

So, Should I ask for more life colors?
Or someone remove my life dusty covers?

Should I ask for more forward tabs?
As, I want to skip this rubbish that tightly grabs

Should I ask for glowing more at peaks?
Or again life ignores all what I speaks?

I know things come true around
When you are moving around

When you are there in front of me
I am glowing more high as you see

When I am sad and dead down inside
You are there putting them aside

When cruelty surrounds and put me down
I see you there with your magic gown

And this firms my believe that, Life is still very Dear
That my loved ones told me very clear

So everything comes with hooks crooks
You have to live life with all its looks

You have colors too there in your way
May your love or family bringing your way

But with all its colors Life is still very Dear
That my loved ones told me very clear

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Author's Note

not my best but even not so worse ;)

Reviews

[anne]

really a nice read....
You have colors too there in your own way
May your love or family bringing the way...so nice... :)

[Eve Ola]

your words are blessing Thanks :)

[kublakhan27]

Wow, you really said it all here...I see a lot of myself in this poem, a lot of demons, and then some, though I'm sure a lots of others will relate to this as well...a lot of people tell me I'm a nice guy, but I rarely feel like one...I tend to want everything I don't have, and resent the people that do...thankfully I have some loved ones to lean on and keep me afloat, as you've referred to here...still I wish I could keep as brave a face as this poem does...nicely done :)

[Eve Ola]

and a big thank you for considering my work amd glad you enjoyed and relate my part side. Thanks :)

[Kurayami]

It is a very nice poem. I like how in the beginning, you suggested that life is dark but in the end you say that life is "beautiful". I like the combination of both negative and positive elements in this poem. I understand how it may not be the best but it is definitely not the worst. Keep up your good work.

~Kurayami

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Kurayami your words are very encouraging and supporting Thanks :)

[priya]

It is lovely Eve...it has a very powerful message that one should always be happy with what he has....that does not mean you should not desire for more, but should never have greed..God always gives us the right thing at the right time...we should just have faith and belief in him... :)

[Eve Ola]

true. Thank you dear, I really appreciate your kind words :)

[priya]

my pleasure Eve.. :)