She Did & She Wants - Blissful Life

She Did & She Wants - Blissful Life

Moving thoughts in my mind
That always resists back behind
I use to play with many tricks
Applying to others with risks mix
Red chilled rose for friend’s day
You are so naughty, that she say
Ordering meal with full feel
Friend's pocket we always steal
I can’t dance, I always regret
But I did well against her's bet
Working together is impossible
But we did, and I make it possible
Bunking office is another play
But we had fun with the bowling play
I never missed any fun ride
But always regret for Discovery ride
Another ride I want to have
RED FERRARI I dearly want to have :(
I love skiing & I love highest climbing
I love flying I love deep diving
But I can't because inside its scaring
Scaring but daring I always wanting
So, One day if I get chance to do
Hopefully I'll be prepared for this do


~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Penny]

You have a little independent, perhaps wrong too with tenses and choice of words in this one, but it surely payed off. What you love, what you did, what you want, you expressed beautifully in this poem the way you wanted, without making it 'presentable' but raw. Wonderful.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Positive hope and energy in the words. Photo gave life to the words and hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Coyote :)

[Susan Beth Horvath]

So masterfully done. The form is interesting and challenging and the content is endearing

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for such praising my work :)

[Ruth]

We should never give up on our dreams :) Lovely write Eve x

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Dear :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol this is fun and adorable. Very nice Eve ;-)

[Eve Ola]

lol yeah :D thanks

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[priya]

this is a very happy poem..the one which makes you forget all your worries and make you smile...always a delight to read you Eve... :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Priya yeah whenever I read this smile is always there :) I really enjoy your feedbacks

[priya]

aww... so sweet of you my dear... :)