Pulled and Peeled

A Haiku about torture, for the Death contest

Your fingernails pulled

Your skin peeled by layers, hours pass

Sweet death, I love you

Author's Note

For a Death contest

Reviews

[Myenigma]

haha nice

[Michael X]

torture gives me shivers, this poem is thick with essense, the core of haiku,
from death to eternity, it is drastically sickening, and thought provoking,
you have my vote, keep up the great work.

[SuicidePact.]

such pain!

wow, even though there was very little words in body. this said alot, ouch!

[Mockingbird]

sounds like a long slow interminable death. and only could end all that. goes to show death is better sometimes.

[Maroon Surreal]

Oohh... That's bloody but excellent.