Savage Wind

Pelting rain,

savage wind,

whirlwind destruction

and closed fingers 'round the door.

04/25/06

Reviews

[Craig2591]

Just starting tornado season here in Ohio and I read this and think, "Yep."

[Barbara Walker]

Then you can identify!

[Frieda P]

Succinct, you delivered fear here in so few words. Kudos.

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you!

[s y e]

I love how you can write short pieces but get such good writes from them! There is so much imagery in this piece. Nicely done.

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you!

[Jake Botha]

Barbara,

Such a short piece, yet there is so much imagery going on. On the surface it is just the fear of a storm. (I can picture a scared wide eyed child clutching at the door handle)

But, deeper still is a darker fear. Not of a storm, but of life and the horrors that might lie outside. A fear of opening up to this onslaught of life itself.

Jake

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you for the kind review! I love your interpretation!

[Coyote Poetry]

Description in 12 words create a vision of storm and fear. That is hard to do in so few words. You did. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote