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i have a lot going on in my head right now so im just venting some. but please, if you have any input or comments, feel free to leave some words. they're always appreciated.

take another step closer to my heart.
the risks you'll take with you have only just begun.

what do you see when you look at me?
your eyes scream to me but its as if i cant hear.

 

its killing me inside, when you dont let me in.

i pry and pry at your door but there's no use

when you've lost the key.

 

you have inner struggles...

of that, i am aware.

i just wish there was something i coud do.

 

it hurts to sit back and watch you crumble

but you say theres nothing i can do.

the best thing i can do is trust that you know

whats going on...and that we'll be ok...

because you know i love you...

and that'll never change.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lacinius]

thanks =]

[Annie]

Wow...That is really powerful. Your poem is really good...wow...